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第1606期英文写作擂台赛【2013年4月8日】

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发表于 2013-4-7 13:07:08 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
第1606期英文写作擂台赛【2013年4月8日】

In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life? Use specific reasons and examples from your experience to explain your answer. When you write your answer, you are not limited to the examples listed in the prompt.

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发表于 2013-4-8 18:01:50 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Cici Zhu 于 2013-4-8 18:04 编辑

To Be Honest First, Then To Be Human

There are so many noble characteristics spoken highly of bysociety and we call them moral quality for they are holy, gracious and cannotbe measured by money. However, sometimes we have to make a choice about whichmoral quality should be put first when two or more of them conflicts with eachother. Take a real example, many soldiers sacrificed to save the victim in Wenchuanearthquake happening on may 12, 2008. And all of them are respectful and shouldbe honored. To a soldier, they are taught to serve the people and help thepeople since they joined the army and they have a high sense of responsibility.While in the eyes of their family members such as wife, mother and father, theyhope they hadn’t losing him. How painful they are in the rest of their life. Yes,soldiers saved many people who get injured in the earthquake, but they also broughtgreat pain to their love ones. I believe they have had a serious inner struggletoo. Before the happiness of themselves, they choose to put the happiness ofothers first. This applied to many choices in our life. We give up on thing doesn’tmean they are not important to us, but because there are more important thingswhich is more important than them. Though it is hard for me to make a choiceamong honesty, responsibility, intelligence and so on to decide which one is themost important characteristic to a person, I would put honesty first. The mainreason that I emphasize the importance of honest is that honest is the rootprinciple for people and the negative effect of violating it is very harmful.

First, honesty is the root principle for people. The mostfundamental distinguish between animal and people are that we have the abilityof thinking and to distinguish between right and wrong. In the process ofevolution for thousands of years, human gradually formed a series of code ofconduct which then were widely accepted by people and regarded them as thestandard which was called moral quality later to judge between right or wrong. Honestyspeaks a big volume in all these standards for many of the other principlesshould be based on honesty. In other words, honesty is the most basic andimportant characteristics to a person. If a person is smart and dishonesty,people would not have a good impression on him for they think he may cheatthem.

Second, the negative effect of dishonesty is much more seriousthan other characteristics. An honest person is often reliable and can be trustfor you need not worry about when he or she is lying. Many corporations puthonesty as the first code of conduct for their employees and pay greatattention to the honesty of candidates in recruitment. One needs to beresponsible for one’s own words and behavior in society and bear theconsequence of your dishonest words and behavior. To be honest helps you to wingood reputation too.

There are also some people argue that to be honesty is notalways good and you need to tell a lie especially when the purpose of lying isto do some good which we call  white lie.In my opinion, to tell a white lie should be another cup of tea. You tell a liein order not to bring damages or hurt to others; people will not say that youare a dishonest person. Instead it can be called considerate. It is the factthat you are telling a lie, while the origin of your purpose is good; this isacceptable to all people.

In conclusion, if you want to be a just person, to be honest first andthen develop other moral qualities to enhance ourselves. People can bear aperson who is not smart or even a person a person who is not responsible. But seldompeople can bear a person who is dishonest. They would keep distance from youand avoid building a relationship with you for you cannot trust at all.


补充内容 (2013-4-9 09:07):
第二段最后两个单词之间忘记敲空格了,我深深滴悔悟啊呜。

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发表于 2013-4-8 16:20:18 | 显示全部楼层
啊呜,我要占首页的楼,五点前编辑好。

补充内容 (2013-4-8 17:43):
原来这里的帖子发表后就不能编辑了啊,我错了。
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发表于 2013-4-8 15:39:13 | 显示全部楼层
it's  all   
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发表于 2013-4-8 10:06:41 | 显示全部楼层
it is very difficult to answer this question,because everybody knows that to be honest is very important ,as well as intelligence is indispensiible to be a man, moreover,people who have a sense of humor is very useful to communicate with others.

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发表于 2013-4-8 12:40:09 | 显示全部楼层
to my whole life, my parents often tell me that if you do a honest girl ,you will get successful work,family and so on. with my growth, i know that what is the most characteristic that a person can have to be successful in life.it is a sense of humor.no characteristic has received more important than humour.

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发表于 2013-4-8 19:46:16 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2013-4-9 21:56:25 | 显示全部楼层
what is the most important characteristic
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发表于 2013-4-11 23:44:08 大耳朵英语3G版 | 显示全部楼层
i think honesty is the best characteristic.because people will treat you the way you treat them
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发表于 2013-4-12 22:35:20 | 显示全部楼层
just have a look
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发表于 2013-4-14 13:09:41 | 显示全部楼层
The topic i have written ,
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发表于 2013-4-26 21:21:51 | 显示全部楼层
There're many qualities that a man is supposed to have so as to be successful in life. The most important, in my view, are perseverence, enthusiasm, in addition to hardwork.
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