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第1607期英文写作擂台赛【2013年4月16日】

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发表于 2013-4-15 20:30:03 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 kangshuo 于 2013-4-15 20:30 编辑

第1607期英文写作擂台赛【2013年4月16日】

TOPIC: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, neighbors depend on each other less than people in the past.
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  2.和邻居交往的过程中,我们会更加的social,

  3.让步,一些emergency还是需要邻居的帮忙。

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发表于 2013-4-16 13:49:13 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Cici Zhu 于 2013-4-16 13:55 编辑


Undoubtedly, I agree with the idea that neighbors depend on each other less that people in the past. This is mainly resulted from the universally existed phenomenon that modern people tend tohave more worries and misgivings in trusting others. It is very common that insome big cities, you lived in a community for many years without talk a word to your neighbors. What’s worse, you even don’t know your neighbor’s name and any information about her or him. This is a negative effect brought by the fast-paced modern life and great living pressure which should paid great attention to by all of us. “No man is an island.” Human being is a kind of socialized animal in nature; we cannot live by ourselves for we need to communicate with others and we need the help from others in many emergencies.

On the one hand, as the rapid development of global economy, Chinese economy soared up too. This provide many opportunities for the youth and more and more young people choose to pursue their career dream in some developed cities like Shanghai, Guangzhou and Shenzhen ect. To be far away from home, to struggle alone, they need to deal with all the frustrations and barriers by themselves. In this situation, if there are some emergencies, nobody could help them. Thus, to get familiar with neighbors can help them to solve the difficulties in life. What’s more, to talk with neighbors and try to build a relationship help them to have a sense of security and reduce the hardness and loneliness of drifting about.

On the other hand, in the aspect of psychology, human being is a kind of socialized animal. To be social means we need to talk with others in order to develop many social skills such as communication ability. The ability of individual is very limited and we always need to cooperate with others to live better and behave better. If you restrict yourself in your own world, you would gradually distant ourselves with the society and may be eliminated by the fierce competition. Modern world is changing every minute, we need social life to help us get the outer information and the latest information to live by.

Will you choose to live by yourself or to live and progress with others? To be eliminated or to live on? Definitely, life will continue and we need a better future. To be a social person benefits you a lotinstead of bring you any loss. We are born on earth where hundreds of nations with hundreds of languages existing, if we refuse communicating, we cannot make a way towards future.


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发表于 2013-4-16 16:23:56 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2013-4-16 17:02:51 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2013-4-17 15:46:40 | 显示全部楼层
    Absolutely, I agree with that nowadays neighbors depend on each other less than people in the past, which is the most common social phenomenon. Somebody never talk to their neighbors or even doesn’t know who their neighbor is.
    There are many reasons giving rise to this phenomenon.The most important reason is the building which we left in. Our living environment gives us more private living space but at the same time separate us from the outside world. On the other hand the fast pace of life limit us only have little time to communicate with neighbors. In addition the pressure in modern life makes us indifferent with others.
    We have one more reasons to change this phenomenon. Firstly, talk with your neighbors should make us happier. Secondly, process to associate with our neighbors, we will be more social.Take a step back, we will need neighbors help when some emergency comes.
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发表于 2013-4-17 22:14:18 | 显示全部楼层
Nowaday many people always complaint that the relationship between neighbor are becom more distant, especially in big cities this phenomenon is more serious,they don’t know each,when they come home from work and then close the door respective,so they have little chance to have a chat,besides,they are reluctant to tall to strangers.
    Fortunately I have some good neighbors and we get along with well each other.There are four family in our floor,when we met at the corridor we always say hello each other,they also take some snacks to my child to eat and play with her.There is another girl in my neighbor,her parent ask me to help her with her homework,I am very pleased to tutor her lesson.Because our floor is the top floor we plant vegetalbes on the roof,in the morining or at evening we water the vegetable together,when  harvested,we shared the fruits each other,when it rained,if one family is out of home, we would help them to put thier clothes in. If we encounter the eletronic lines fault, we'll ask one of the neighbor for help,because he is a electrician.
      All in all, we all as a family. If anyone encounter difficulties, we won't stand by.I feel very luck for having such good neighbors.
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发表于 2013-4-18 19:48:47 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 琵琶金翠羽 于 2013-4-18 19:50 编辑

    It is self-evident that neighbors depend on each other less than people in the past nowdays. More and more people agree with this statement and they realize that they are responsible for this phenomenon ,more or less.As we all know that we can benefit from communicating with neighbors.
    First of all, it is very interesting to communicate with neighbors. Because we can know the new information about the community and exchange minds between us. What is worth to say is that talking with others can diminish pressure and have confidence in oneself,which is proved to be true by scientists. The most important is that we can feel happy when we communicate with neighbors.
    There is an old saying”no one is an island”. Sometimes we will feel lonely,but we can`t live alone,we are social men. When communicate with our neighbours ,we become more and more social. As a social man,it is vital to depend on others ,moreover,it is indispensible to touch with neighbors.
     In addition,when we are in trouble,we can turn to neighbours to ask for help. For example ,sometimes we need neighbours to take care of babies or tidy up the garden or buy some things by the way. If you are a newer,don`t hesititate to ask for help when you are in an emergency. If you are familiar to the circumanstance around here,don`t refuse to offer help when your neighbors are in trouble.
     Above all ,we can benefit a lot from depending on beighbors. Hence,we need do something to improve this adverse phenomenon. Communicate with neighbors,help each other and enjoy party ,only in this way can we feel happy and have a bright future.
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发表于 2013-4-18 19:55:01 | 显示全部楼层
Technology is a rapier.More and more people like to chat with each other in internet instead of face to face.There is a normol situation that we live in a building 20 or 30 years and we cannot call our neighbor's name out.We neither invite our neighbor to enjoy a meal or hang out together.The only thing that we may do is nodding to each other with a embarrassed smile when we meet in a norrow road and we have to do that.
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发表于 2013-4-19 08:37:33 | 显示全部楼层

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发表于 2013-4-26 16:56:46 | 显示全部楼层
Neighbors are so important a part of our life, especially in the modern society. Humans, as social animal, are always living in a certain group, as few of us can live totally in isolation.
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