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第1615期英文写作擂台赛【2013年5月14日】

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第1615期英文写作擂台赛【2013年5月14日】

TOPIC: Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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[hide]Everyone must work to live, but many people are fortunate enough to make more money than they immediately need. What should they do with this extra income? While it is tempting for people to spend it all on things they desire, I believe it is better to save at least a portion of the extra income for the future.

  By saving money, people give themselves more security. They cannot predict the future; perhaps one day they will be jobless. At a time like this their savings can spare them a great deal of suffering and help to see them through the hard time. In addition, saving money allows people to build up a larger sum. They can then buy something more worthwhile than the small things they can but if they spend the money right away. For example, they may be able to buy a house with their savings. Finally, the practice of saving helps people develop the habit of setting goals and planning for their future. In this way they are bound to lead more meaningful and successful lives.

  Most people would like to enjoy their money immediately. Nobody likes to wait for the things that he wants. However, if we learn to save our money, we can gain more advantages in the future. We will lead more secure and, thus, happier lives. We will also be able to buy the things we truly want but cannot afford right now.[/
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嗯 十分满分的话 这篇给8.5分  发表于 2013-5-13 23:46
发表于 2013-5-14 14:57:00 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2013-5-16 17:58:09 | 显示全部楼层
    The common methods of dealing with money are consumption and saving.Despite different people possibly have different attitude with it,the most significant matter is that weather you have your money to provide the most value.Then how to make it?
   On the one hand,money need to be spend to satisfy the basic survival demand of life for granted such as food,traffic,cloth,house.Further more,your absolutely have spiritual needs like watching film,traveling,dating which also cost a lot.Higher life standards accordingly need higher cost.So the crucial thing is to set up a reasonable standards of acceptable consumption for your life,rather than enjoying or saving money you earn blindly.
    One the other hand, no one knows what will happen tomorrow.So saving money support you to cope  with various crisis unexpectedly just like unemployment,disease...In addition,the realization of your plans such as training,health care greatly rely on the number on your account.
    Generally speaking,We are eager to make life rich and colorful meanwhile keep sense of security for future so that enjoying or saving money are considered both important to our life.The only thing you need to do is to do well to balance these two.
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